ENG 316 Week 10 Assignment 8 Proposal Critique on weaknesses using track changes.(Study Guide) (worth 100 Points)

Proposal for Plant Service (Heading to fit APA requirement) To: (Indicate name) From: (Indicate name) Date: March 10, 2016 (Include date) Subject: Proposal for Plant Service Background (This should come first in a p ...

Proposal for Plant Service (Heading to fit APA requirement) To: (Indicate name) From: (Indicate name) Date: March 10, 2016 (Include date) Subject: Proposal for Plant Service Background (This should come first in a project proposal) I have been in the interior plant maintenance business for 32 years and have owned and operated Green Thumb Planting for the last seven years. All associates with Green Thumb Planting take pride in their work, and Green Thumb is happy to provide references. Abstract (Replace ‘problem’ with abstract) Mason Office Center is a lovely Georgian building containing four offices. However, the interior is not attractive or inviting for clients/customers and employees. The off-white walls throughout the complex seem dull and boring, adjectives the tenants do not want associated with their businesses. In addition, the air in the building is musty and unpleasant at times. Proposal description (Replace ‘solution’ with ‘project description) Green Thumb Planting can provide and maintain a beautiful plantscape in the building that will attract visitors and employees as well as purify the air and introduce more oxygen. Research shows that people respond positively to interiors with at least two plants per room. These changes can be made in an unobtrusive, cost-effective manner. Our proposal budget PROPOSAL FOR PLANT SERVICE 3 estimate is $977.40 (see overleaf for an elaborate breakdown). (Include an estimate of budget requirements in the description) Objectives of Proposed Plan Installing plantings in Mason Office Center will give visitors and employees a more appealing and cleaner environment, producing positive feelings and