Question Guidance Marks Text features
1 Text A is a humorous piece from the magazine
section of the Saturday edition of The
Guardian newspaper, in which the writer
Catherine Bennett pretends to be a so-called
‘empty
...
Question Guidance Marks Text features
1 Text A is a humorous piece from the magazine
section of the Saturday edition of The
Guardian newspaper, in which the writer
Catherine Bennett pretends to be a so-called
‘empty nester’, a mother whose children have
just left home. It seems like the speaker is
talking to a friend in a similar position. The
article was published in August 2015.
Giving careful consideration to the context of
the text:
(a) identify and analyse patterns of lexical and
semantic use.
(b) identify and analyse the way sentences
are constructed.
Possibilities are provided below for guidance but
any valid response should be rewarded.
General contextual points (AO3): Context can be
understood in different ways. In this text there is
the context of the text’s genre: a piece of satirical
writing (part of a series) in a broadsheet
newspaper. These kinds of pieces appear in the
quality press and in Private Eye, where a ‘type’,
usually particularly self-assured and/or in a high
status position in society, is mocked through
exaggeration. These pieces will develop in some
way and become increasingly absurd as they go
on. This one has a twist at the end where we
realise that the ‘empty-nester’ is actually glad to
20 In each of the bullet points below, AO1 is covered at the start of
the point and AO3 at the end.
(a) identify and analyse patterns of lexical and
semantic use
Possible features could be:
• use of proper nouns, reflecting the fact that the text
relates to travel: ‘Syria’, ‘St Andrews’, ‘Toronto’
• temporal references/markers: ‘never’, ‘more time’, ‘every
time’, ‘September’, ‘Christmas’
• a mix of low (‘Mandarin’) and high frequency (‘flat’) lexis,
reflecting broadsheet context
• lexical field of education: ‘tutors’, ‘essays’, ‘personal
statements’
• use of foreign lexis ‘en suite’ – not italicised, as
audience familiarity would be assumed
• colloquial lexis used to create an informal register ‘kids’,
and neologism ‘cuddlies’
• satirical effect comes from repetition of hyperbolic lexis
‘bereavement’ and ‘howling’
• shift from speaker’s smugness to selfishness,
established semantically through movement from ‘sitting
on her bed and howling’ to ‘off to the dump’ – use of
bathos – means that discourse structure of text helps
with pragmatic effect, with the ‘twist’ saved for the last
paragraph
• the semantics of the early part convey to the reader a
critique of the smugness of the speaker with phrases
like ‘joint history of art and Mandarin’ and the idea that9
have the house free at last. It is designed to
entertain but can also have a persuasive slant,
prompting the reader to be critical of the subject. In
terms of the social, cultural and historical context
that surrounds the text, the speaker is clearly
middle class and affluent (‘little place in France’)
and the implied reader, who may recognise
something of themselves in the character, should
find their voice entertaining and irritating at the
same time.
This piece of written satire fits within the wider
genre of satirical work, including TV and radio
impression shows and the work of comedians and
actors like Sacha Baron Cohen and Catherine
Tate. It follows discourse structure of a one-sided
conversation (e.g. the question at the start
suggests they are already talking ‘That’s your last
one off in September?’ and ‘I know, thanks’ implies
that the speaker is replying to a suggestion from
her friend). The reader, meanwhile, probably just
sees the speaker as self-centred and dominant.
The text is ironic: Catherine Bennett is taking on
this voice to make fun of it. The character is meant
to irritate the reader with comments like the last
line ‘Do you want to see a picture of the puppy?’
which suggests that she has been pretty quick to
replace her daughter.
the implied listener in the text would automatically know
that ‘St Andrews’ was a university, not just a town –
links to context
• shared knowledge expected here from the actual
reader, who being part of the audience for a broadsheet,
would know many of the references
(b) identify and analyse the way sentences are
constructed
Possible aspects could be:
• verb mood: uses of interrogative, sometimes to imply
that this is a conversation, albeit one-sided, and
sometimes rhetorical (‘They never stop being your baby,
do they?’) – all designed to present character as selfcentred and ripe for mockery
• Questions come in succession, in the tradition of
quaestitio in rhetorical speech – bombarding the internal
audience but also, obviously, the reader, making the
character all the more irritating (e.g. end of first
paragraph, three in a row)
• minor sentences keep conversational feel (e.g. ‘Me, too,
St Andrews’ ‘But young people can be so selfish, can’t
they?’) – helps give authenticity to the speech and
enforces satire, since reader often wants to reply ‘no’ to
what she says (e.g. showing the puppy at the end,
perhaps). ‘Me, too, St Andrews’ is superficially just
chatty, but probably meant to exhibit trait of speaker to
show off what her daughter is doing
• Uses of tag questions (e.g. ‘can’t they’, ‘do they’), seen
by Lakoff and others as female trait, designed often to
engage other speakers. Here, again, probably meant to
show a rather shallow element to the speaker, who
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