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NINE – THE ATTIC OF STARS
She’s in the office attic...
KALI: This attic might be her favourite
room
It was just roof space far as the
eye can
Full of junk
All the families who used to live here
just dumped all their s*** up here...
magazines newspapers from Biblical
times old photographs she’s not a Big
Fan of ‘Families’
There was a desiccated fossilised
flat mouse stuck to this floor joist just
here
Where she’s standing now...just a
model city of piles piles piles of s***
some baby clothes filthy rolls of early
wallpaper with a garish but now faded
space rocket design...
Nearly filled the largest size skip!
F****** families
They’ve made it so they can stand up
straight in it
They’ve put in velux windows so
they can see for miles upon city miles
God, the views
This is the one room in the house
they can see to the distant horizon...
But she doesn’t look at that...
Who has he been phoning?
She investigates his mobile
Who has he been texting?
Mick
Mick
Topher
Work
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Mick
Mummy Lady C***-F*** has
learned how to text...
Interesting...
Nothing in his calls
Ansaphone empty.
No s*** Sherlock!
Let’s go into missed calls...elementary
my dear Watson...
Missed calls...
Topher Mick Domino Pizza! Mr
Gordon-f******-Ramsay???
Mick
Hello?
A number she doesn’t recognise...
But has been expecting...
A Mystery number
She calls the mystery number
Ansaphone message woman’s
voice...
She’s called Louise...
She wants me to leave a message...
No chance, C***!
So
She was right
A leopard does not change his
acne
US: Look all you like
Look as far as you like
You’re still earthbound Earthling
These are not your stars
There are no stars for you
You cannot see constellations
You’re a blind girl
You’re a deaf girl
You have learning difficulties
You are mind impaired
Nowhere you look is far enough away
for you
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You are a black hole
You are an infinite black hole
We are very disappointed to discover
you still do not
Realise this!
And they give her back...
shuts the mobile
Yes...from this room...the most
fabulous views...
You can see Iceland on a clear day...
She’s looking out of the window...
At night, stars. F*** the stars you can
see.
And for her last Christmas...
He always buys her extravagant
presents
...he bought her a telescope!!!
She puts her hand on it.
He’s shown her and shown her how to
use the f****** thing...
But every time she tries to do it on her
own...
It fucking f**** up
She looks through
Nothing!
Gives it a vicious shake...
It’s a sort of library reference officey
space
The desk here with all the bose
and mac-ery and ipoddery...
Makes it like the flight deck of the
Starship Enterprise...
Like she’s the controller of
something...
but mostly
up here
she wishes he had given her
an instrument that hasn’t been
invented yet...
something small enough to conceal
something so powerful
it can look into someone’s brain
and see what they are thinking...
to know absolutely
that someone means what he says...
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What are you doing?
TODD: [From downstairs...]
Cooking
What are you doing?
KALI: Reading
And she looks at something on the
screen...
TEN – A FISH RECIPE
And in their separate spaces...
TODD goes near to the landline
phone.
Looks at it for a bit...goes back to...
TODD: ‘in a pan gently sweat...the
onions, leeks, garlic and fennel...’
KALI: ‘Quality Hotel Prince Olaf
Oxholmsgrand 2
Stockholm
Sweden
Come to this charming hotel
consisting of just 32 rooms all
equipped to ensure a comfortable
stay for our guests and leave all your
everyday cares at home’...
TODD: ‘gently sweat hah!...in butter just
to start the softening process...’
all the vegetables...
softening process...
He somehow discovers himself by the
landline receiver again.
He goes to the fridge
KALI: ‘each “premium” rate room
possesses a luxurious
private bathroom with a top-of-therange array of comfort products to
soak all those cares away...’
‘Massages are available inquire
at reception professionally-trained
Swedish hands will make those
tensions disappear...’
He discovers he is singing something
incriminating...like ‘I just called to say
I love you...’ he stops.
‘Extensive mini-bar.
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Private wet room
Trouser press...’
He opens the fridge.
He finds the champagne.
He looks at it.
Puts it back.
He shuts the fridge.
Goes back to reading the recipe...
TODD: ‘Gently sweat in butter
...Just to start the softening process
but not so that they give up all
resistance...’
KALI: ‘Thoroughly relaxed
it is now time to visit the Local
attractions
which include the Folk Museum,
the world’s largest IKEA store...’
TODD: ‘Season’
TODD’s mobile goes
KALI answers it...
KALI: His mobile goes
TODD: His mobile goes
KALI: Hello?
TODD: He hopes it’s not...
He listens intently...
KALI: Topher!
Good!
Actually, he’s in the middle of
cooking.../you know what he’s like
when he’s cooking!
You can talk to me though...tell me...
Oh, I’m sure he’d have loved that!
You should have given us more
notice we’ve made plans for toni...
Home
Romantic Dinner For Two
Aw shame
Where are you all going?
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Aw. Shame.
Yeah I’ll tell him.
We would have loved that!
TODD: ‘Lay the vegetables as a bed for
your fish.’
Make your bed.
‘Place your fish on its vegetable bed.’
Then lie on it
‘Dot
With knobs of butter ‘
You knob.
KALI: [Quieter...] Hey, Topher...
Do you know anybody called Louise?
TODD: ‘Check the fish with a knife..’
Gutted.
KALI: No...somebody left a message
[It’s very light, unimportant...] and
we’ve no f****** idea who she is!
TODD: ‘the flesh should fall easily off the
bone’
KALI: It’s probably a wrong number then.
Yeah. Stockholm.
Departing London Heathrow 16.25
Arriving Arlanda Stockholm 19.55
We’re flying Finn Air [She laughs]
Can’t wait.
Oh! I can smell food. Got to go...
Yeah
We’ll send you a postcard of The
Largest IKEA store in the Universe.
Bye
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Drama and Theatre
H459/44: Deconstructing texts for performance Stockholm
Advanced GCE
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1. Annotations
Annotation Meaning
Blank page
Unclear
Knowledge
Knowledge and understanding
Not answered question
Lengthy narrative
Repeat
Tick
Cross
Effective evaluation
Vague
Odd or incorrect grammar
No example
Relating to question
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2. Subject Specific Marking Instructions
Level Descriptors
Each question is worth 30 marks.
This paper will assess AO3: Demonstrate knowledge and understanding of how drama and theatre is developed and performed.
Level 5: 25–30 marks Excellent and highly developed references to any theatrical processes or practices, used in the role of a director, involved with
interpreting and performing theatre.
Excellent and highly developed demonstration of how a director’s creative and artistic choices can influence how meaning is
communicated to an audience.
Excellent and highly developed understanding of how the performance text has been constructed and can be performed.
Excellent and highly developed understanding of how the social, cultural, historical context of the performance text can affect
how the performance text is interpreted and performed for an audience.
Level 4: 19–24 marks Confident reference to any theatrical processes or practices, used in the role of a director, invol
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